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dtls224
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| 07/01/2008 5:00 AM |
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A while ago I posted aout a 6 word story written by Hemmingway that went "for sale: baby shoes, never worn" and it got me to thinking if any of us could write a 6 word story about our dogs...........
So here are a few from me.........
Rainy walk beautifully; where's my shoes
The best show ever; Rainy grinned.
"It wasn't me": as feathers fall
Rainy: Nope this is just right!
Only pink. Looks good. Tastes better.
Comer here mousy. come to Rainy!!
See me! Come one! See me!!!
Have a great day every one!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/01/2008 2:41 PM |
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| oooh, these are fun, just like haiku's. I'll work on some!! |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/01/2008 2:45 PM |
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Aka is mischief in motion forever.
Taffy’s tail wags with tongue hanging.
Two ratties. Much joy. Plenty laughter.
Aka sleeps late. Taffy rises early.
Taffy chases squirrel; nearly catches tail.
Aka barks at door; nothing there.
Two ratties, one lap, much crowding. |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/01/2008 2:47 PM |
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| Cheryl those are really good!!!!!!!!!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/01/2008 2:53 PM |
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Here are some more............
One up. Two down. Ear wars!!
Not Chi. Not JRT. Just love.
Me. Me. Me. All about ME!
Easy. Easy. Don't move. Ok, lick!
Rainy: Smell, roll. Me: Sniff, Yuck!
My lap. No my lap, ha! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/01/2008 2:54 PM |
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Okay, now you have me hooked.
Mom sleeps, Ratty awakes, must play.
Two bully sticks, two ratties, much fussing.
White hair sheds; covers like snow.
Two toned, three toned, my ratties.
Toys tossed everywhere by Hurricane Aka.
Jumping into my lap, Taffy lands.
Twin bed, me, two ratties; crowded.
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/01/2008 2:56 PM |
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Tina,
Yours are great!! I love ear wars and the rolly stink!! I'm afraid you have created a nut case here though, I'm thinking in sixes now!! LOL!! keep em coming. |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/01/2008 3:06 PM |
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Cheryl, do a search on 6 word stories and read some that are out there.........some made me laugh til i cried and some just made me cry...........ok here goes.....
Me, Rainy NO!!, Rainy, Yeah Right!
Find shoe, smell shoe, chew shoe.
Hold, pull, seam breaks, toy...DEAD!!
Run, squat, pee, repeat...repeat...repeat
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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alice4512
Bratty Ratty
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| 07/01/2008 3:07 PM |
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Okay now I am hooked:
Fred eats endlessly; where's Alice's food?
Alarm went off, time for walk?
Play mommy play, we never tire!
My rescues, life no longer cruel.
Alice laps Fred, He is slow. |
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The great pleasure of a dog is that you may make a fool of yourself with him and not only will he not scold you, but he will make a fool of himself too
~Mom to my good boy Fred and my crazy girl Alice~ |
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/01/2008 3:09 PM |
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| TREAT!, no....TREAT!, no...TREAT! YESSSSSSS!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/01/2008 3:10 PM |
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| I love the play mommy play!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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RatsRule!
Ratastic
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| 07/01/2008 3:17 PM |
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Can I try?
Bonnie: Long way home, finally here!
Chloe: Bark! Chase me, chase you!
3 spots, 2 ratties, 1 love.
Treat? I sit? Treat?! I sit!!!
Running, running, can you catch me?
Black sweater, white fur. Why not?
One lap, two ratties, mom's content.
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~ Life is sweeter when you share it with a couple of Ratties ~ Terri, proud mom of Chloe & Bonnie
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/01/2008 3:21 PM |
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| Good!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/01/2008 9:18 PM |
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All of these are dynamite!!
I am going to play with some more later after I get all the chores done and the ratties some loving!! |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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tauney4
Pack Leader
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| 07/01/2008 9:21 PM |
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| cute stories!!!!!! |
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/01/2008 10:47 PM |
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Silent Ratties; mischief is under foot.
Tap Tap, I want outside NOW!
Taffy crouching low, squirrel is mine!
Rap Rap, I want inside NOW!
Let ratties out, Let ratties in.
Eyes staring, mouth drooling, please share.
Sit for a treat? I will!
Lay down for a treat? Nope.
Aka come! Taffy Come! Ratty recall. |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/02/2008 1:31 AM |
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| Cheryl you are having alot of fun with these!!!!!!!!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/02/2008 1:45 AM |
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Pink toes, sweet breath, baby ratties..........
1 a.m., yawn: 4 a.m. , yawn...........potty time....
Ready.................go...............Ready...................go.................Ready...............sleep!!!
See it! See it!..........Catch MEEEEEEEEEE!
Get ready, mark, get set...............snuggle!!!
1. Roll.........2. Sit..........3. TREAT>>>>>>>>>
Come here.........come here.........quit running........
Sad eyes.......mournful cries...........shelter raised..........
Puppy grins...........puppy wags.........shelter free
Soulful eyes, gentle face, Heaven awaits......
Ears flap......nose alert.......window down........
Cold nose.........warm tounge........alarm clock!!!!!!!!
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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alice4512
Bratty Ratty
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| 07/03/2008 4:42 PM |
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I love these!!
Fireworks scare Fred, World is ending
Alice bites my nose! High jumer
my rescues rescued me right back
Alice loves Fred, Fred tolerates Alice
Have Ratties, Have Sense of Humor
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The great pleasure of a dog is that you may make a fool of yourself with him and not only will he not scold you, but he will make a fool of himself too
~Mom to my good boy Fred and my crazy girl Alice~ |
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/03/2008 6:53 PM |
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| Alice, love the rescues rescued me right back! too cool. everyone has done wonderful stories!! |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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MurphyDog
Ratastic
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| 07/04/2008 3:08 AM |
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OK ME!!! I wanna try!!
Murphy eats trash. I pay cash.
Monkeys in your butt. Not good.
I am the wierdest person EVAR.
Murphy come here. No, come here. HERE! COME!!! Murphy. Murphy!!! COME HERE!!!
That was more than six words. <---- But this wasn't  |
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Mitch and Murphy Hancock (the dog)
"I've seen a look in dogs' eyes, a quickly vanishing look of amazed contempt, and I am convinced that basically dogs think humans are nuts." - John Steinbeck |
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dtls224
Terrier Terror
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| 07/04/2008 3:17 AM |
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| Mitch those were just GGGGGGGGGReat!!! |
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tina224...live...laugh...love...and bark at the moon
He is your friend, your partner, your defender, your dog. You are his life, his love, his leader. He will be yours, faithful and true, to the last beat of his heart. You owe it to him to be worthy of such devotion." ~Unknown |
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cherylwordweaver
Rat-A-Tat-Tat
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| 07/04/2008 9:24 PM |
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LOL way to go Mitch!
Everyone has presented some awesome 6 word stories and the best thing is being about ratties, they make total sense!! I hope more folks try this. |
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“Aloha- - -to learn what is not said, to see what cannot be seen, and to know the unknowable.” Queen Liliaokalani
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